Friday, January 3, 2014

Double page spread feedback

Again, I have asked my classmates and teacher for some feedback on my double page spread. My classmates said that they thought it was effective how my image was only on one side but I still used a smaller image on the other as magazines are usually full of them. To improve they said to continue with the work and begin my next task of editing images. My teacher read my interview draft that was written in my exercise book and said that that was good also, however, it could be improved by inserting more exclusive secretive information so the reader feels like they are involved. I will consider these points when continuing to work on my page and editing it to make improvements.

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